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Post by Avvy on Jan 19, 2012 4:10:06 GMT -5
(Note from Avvy: Moved this to it's own thread for ease of finding it)
User login:insanity91 Character name:Silanor Nask Desired race:Dragon ,Black Race abilities:Alertness ,str+1 ,Alertness resistance to acid 5 ,+1 natural armor Race Description:An individual born a little different from the others ,the individual displays characteristics from another creature. Soruce Material: bloodlines d20srd.org
Background: In the town of Kalaram the night the outbreak started there was a couple living in a small home Estel Nask and Brimington Nask ,Estel was with child and was about to conceive during a horrorifying night as the baby came out Brimington was not surprised to see what the baby had looked like as his father before him was a black dragon who had taken human form and fell inlove with a woman , Brimington had thought of a name for his new born sun ,his name will be Silanor , the baby had featured a set of black wings on his back and scales covered his whole body and a tail tough as a sword ,as soon as Silanor wa born the dead were breaking through the door hoping to find freash meat , Brimington quickly hid his son somewhere safe the dead then broke through and had attacked the couple leaving the baby with just a name and no purpose.
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Post by Avvy on Jan 19, 2012 4:18:54 GMT -5
Okay, a few things with this. I'll start with good research on the abilities. However the +1 natural armour doesn't hit until level twelve, and thus you would need to be Gold Token in order to gain that bonus.
Now, with the background. How did the baby survive? A newborn baby, no matter if it has a hint of dragon blood, would not be able to survive alone under normal circumstances, let alone during a zombie plague.
He wouldn't know his name if both parents died.
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Post by insanity91 on Jan 19, 2012 12:41:07 GMT -5
Yea I had just thought of that when I finished typing out the background ,He was founded by a surviver that had taken him in and cared for him until he was able to venture on his own
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Post by insanity91 on Jan 19, 2012 18:49:56 GMT -5
yea thats true about the name i wasnt thinking of that >.> ,then i can change it to a surviver had found the child the next morning after the dead had gone ,the survivors name was Daniel Nask since Daneil was going to raise the boy he was going to need a name so then he called him Silanor.
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Post by Avvy on Feb 2, 2012 5:12:39 GMT -5
Approved.
Create the character and then let me know he's been made and I will do the leto work needed and let you know once it's ready to be played.
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